Here are a few excerpts from the group's comments.
- You have managed to capture my imagination and I am dying to know more. A receipt and a rhyme - intriguing. Julee Stillman
- A great into to the story, and look forward to reading more. Sonia Doherty
- Everyone loves a mystery especially one that has an air of excitement and danger attached to it. You have stated the answers lay in the cryptic wording and it is my guess that most readers will attempt to solve the puzzle and relate their assumptions to the circumstances as they occur. Frank Ince
- Well old chum, the Wordsmiths has done you a power of good. This is the best piece of writing from you that I've read so far. A very good start to what I feel will be a great strong story. Les Stillman
You can get an insight into the ghost of Les Gillespie (without me giving the story away) in previous posts on my blog.
Thanks for the visit.